I want to talk a little bit about the story structure. Like I said earlier, the beginning of the book was very slow and a little bit tedious to read. However, the end of the book was really interesting and I could not stop reading. I think the exposition was a little bit too long and the inciting moment does not really occur until around the midpoint of the novel. The rising action was very good, but it was cut a little bit short because of the length of the exposition. The climax occurred towards the very end of the story, with maybe 15 pages afterwards. The falling action was very satisfying because it achieved the goal of unraveling the story without being boring. I think the story structure looks something like this:
If I were to talk about the story structure as Kurt Vonnegut would describe it, I think it would be something along the lines of this:
The story starts off with Taylor in a poor, poverty-stricken Kentucky neighborhood where she hates it. Then, things get worse when she decides to leave Kentucky and hates the road even more. She starts to think she may regret leaving. But things get better, quickly. She then receives Turtle, her joy in life, and finds her six best friends. She is living happily in Tucson, until two of her friends, illegal immigrants, must go to Oklahoma in order to not be captured by border patrol. She drives then there, and feels extremely sad and depressed. But, this trip was not all bad. She legally adopts turtle and returns to Tucson with a heart of happiness and fulfillment.
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